I looked over your WIP manual as well and found it to be very solid and easy to understand.
All the photos really help and while I didn’t click on and watch any of the youtube video links I think that is a great additional bit of info to include.
I personally would split the tools and materials into 2 chunks, and note anything necessary or strongly recommended, but that’s just me (put it at the top of the list in a box or with an asterisk so it gets the reader’s attention). I would also include the must have materials on your main webpage under the “Here's what you will need to complete the assembly:” section. I see you listed High temp Silicone, but sounds like it should be the “copper” type. I’ll place an order for these items on amazon when I order my printer so I’ll have everything I need when my printer arrives.
It sounds like you need:
- PermaTex Ultra Copper High Temp RTV
Uninsulated crimp on connectors, sized for 22-18ga wire (Radio Shack P/N 640-3036 is an excellent choice).
Thread locking glue. (Loctite, Permatex, etc).
1/2” wide roll of Kapton tape
Electrician's tape
Zip ties
And some optional RC car style connectors if you want quick disconnects (the photos and links you provided for these were great btw).
This is very nitpicky I know, but it might save people a trip or two to the store or worse a week waiting on an order from amazon. You kind of hype up the “this is a complete kit with every nut and bolt” at the top of the page (which it pretty much is), so listing the few materials needed at the bottom would be useful when ordering. I just hate when I get working on something and have to stop because I don’t have all the necessary supplies on hand : )